It’s going to be fun
All kind of sports
Everyone will participate
And no one will be bored
Discus and shotput
High jump and long jump
Running on the track
And have a little pump
Eat whenever you want
Only on the stage
And when it’s time
Get ready to race
No going barefoot
Wear running shoes
The track is really hot
And race with tough foes
Shotput has a heavy ball
Shoot it as far as you can
Use your palm only
And you’ll need a fan
Long jump is cool
Try getting speed
Your feet needs to touch
And they count your metres
Nice writing very detailed about athletics day.
Work on your punctuation and vocab.
That’s so cool buddy I wish I was there too see rimu win
Thank you these rhymes were made up and I wish you were there to see Rimu win
Nice blog nice details nice paragraphs and puncuations
Thank you these rhymes were hard to put in so it took me a while.
Great writing and punctuation aveer keep it up