Do you remember the campfire?
We sat and acted like a choir
Singing songs that we repeated
Some were nonsense that was revealed
Do you remember the cabins?
Some top bunk people were shaken
Drawing on the wall from others
And we didn’t care about the drawings from another
Do you remember the activities?
Kayaking was so hard and fun
Archery bows are weapons like a gun
High beam was super high
Giants Ladder was making me fly
Do you remember having food
It was super yum and made me full
Dinner we have burgers and chicken
It is yum I went for seconds
Hi aveer your poem was pretty good in my opinion, if there’s anything you need to work on its most likely adding more detail and better vocabulary.
hi Aveer this poem is good i like it