a snake.
2 wants to slither.
3 his name is Heather. He’s like a feather .
4 the snake climbed over the leaves and.
They crumble like a cookie.
5 the leaves crumbled like frosted flakes.
6 he ate the leaves. It was crunchy like normal cereal.
7 It wa so windy the leaves ranaway.
8 the leaves are crackling like corn flakes.
9 I want to ball.
10 but I’m am to skinny and always fall
11 they say im to short like a ant but I will prove them wrong
12they won’t be laughing when I win it all
11 replies on “Snake and basketball”
Very good writing fella I loved reading your good poem you are wise man
Good and nice words,Ayden
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Good poem Ayden!
Very wise poem I think you are good and writing 😂I’m interested in becoming interested 😂😂all jokes aside good writing
Thank you sir.
I think your blog is really good but you need to work on your spelling and vocabulary.
Thank you Ryan for this comment this really helped me on what I need to work on.
Very nice blog Ayden, you definitely could improve my adding more punctuation and more descriptive words. Otherwise great job!
Thank you Chelsea I now know what I need to work on!
Hey Ayden, I like the detail in your poem it’s very interesting!