Long ago about a million years ago, there was a world that no one could imagine, everyone was rude and mean, no one ever cared about anyone. Only one person knew about being nice? It was a normal school girl named Barleen.
Barleen was always hiding how she felt because that was the rule of the world: you can never show nice emotions. Barleen felt that she could help the world and make a difference. She went down to the basement to find a lab coat for the experiment of the nice potion. She really needs a better name for that but yes I found the lab coat and found this big round bowl. Is this a Cauldron? It looks old, maybe I can make the potion in here?
Barleen added water in the Cauldron and thought what is I can put lots of stuff that will make people nice or maybe I can make a word like ki-nd-ness yea kindness, was a great word. She decided that maybe unicorn slime would make people shiny and kind and maybe some kids toys that are magical.
Barleen went back home went to the Cauldron and dropped all the stuff she bought from Kmart she thought maybe she should add, sweet milk or chocolate milk she went to New World And bought 10 bottles of milk and went back home and pounded the milk in it got all of my face I got a giant pencil and stirred and stirred till it was liquidity.
Barleen thought what if she freezes it and makes it into a meteor and then launches into space and it will change the world she started freezing it right away. One month later she checked on it and it was done.
She called up NASA right away and they took the meteor and brought it into space. They launched it, and it took a few hours like 100 hours to reach the sea. It made the biggest splash in history when she looked at the NASA workers. They had a smile on their face IT WORKED THE METEOR WORKED that was the end of the cruel world welcome kindness.
Wow Barleen! This blog is very creative! There was a few bits that didn’t really make sense, including the random switches between third and first person, but otherwise a great blog!
Good job Barleen, I like your blog, I also like how interesting you made the introduction.