This is my second week in Kahu as a year 8. I have been doing rotations to learn what this year is going to be like, learning various things, like : NRich, Blogs, NZCM, and a few other new things this year. We also have started our first art project of the year, the Chinese New Year lanterns. I worked with a peer to create a lantern for out upcoming celebration. We made slides to show our work.
We spent most of the first day naming our stationary, setting ourselves up, and getting to know our class. This year I am in Kahu 2, I have been enjoying the year so far, my Teacher is Miss Smith. I am starting to apply for my jobs and doing the forms for tech. We also completed a writing asttle, and we have been spending some blocks in week 2 marking the different things from the test.
Hey Chelsea great writing piece, I like how you added factual detail of what actually happed on the first day all though I feel like you should add more punctuation to your paragraphs and maybe add a a bit for detail to your writing piece.
Thank you very much Barleen, your feedback was extremely helpful and I will definitely use this.
Feather : It’s nice that you included lots of activities that were active during you first few days at Kāhu!
Feather: I thought it was so cool that you put the link to your slides to show the work you’ve completed!
Wings badge: Next time, your writing could have comments of your feelings or how you felt like whilst spending your time at Kāhu! ٩( ᐛ )و
Thank you very much for the feedback, I will take this into consideration and definitely remember this next time I write a blog.
Your first few days in Kāhu sound amazing! I like how you added detail to your writing and explained how your first few days in Kāhu were