It was the day where skill was tested
Events of variety to be perfected,
All had a goal and that was to win
To triumph opponents, otherwise beaten.
But though that were the case, it was as joyous as heavenly choruses
In competing with trying, whereas some with flawlessness,
The day was as long as the tallest tower
But time flies as fast as light around the hour.
As it came to a close
Everyone came knows,
It’s worth trying, at the start or around the dot
Who wouldn’t ease to do so, would you not
Great job Darlene. I love how your poem rhymes and you have great descriptive words.
There is just one word that is wrong and it’s knows which I think is supposed to be know.
Ah I see, thank you Kaitlyn!