Hi Darlene, I enjoyed reading your piece of writing. I liked how you included photos, and the theme matches the vibe of your writing. One thing you could improve is adding a little more detail, but overall, great job. Reply
Hi Darlene,
I enjoyed reading your piece of writing. I liked how you included photos, and the theme matches the vibe of your writing. One thing you could improve is adding a little more detail, but overall, great job.