Today for two whole blocks, (including morning tea), we went to Tōtara park and went on two very tiring walks and while doing this we used the Seek app to help us identify different plants and animals.
While walking it was very muddy, wet and I didn’t see that many animals because it was so loud however using the app was really good because it had a system that told us how accurate it was, however during morning tea both of my vips broke on my bag but luckily I had a spear, small bag in there so I moved basically everything in there so it would fall out but it was so heavy!!
Also when using the Seek app I found it very easy to identify different plants although my camera was glitched and it was very confusing to work around.
I learned to try not to break my bag while going to tōtara park for more than half of the day and to pack a little more water.
These are the plants I found
Very well detailed and explained just a little work on adding more information in some paragraphs (at least 5-7 sentences in one). And also maybe explain about the plants with the photos, While everything else is alright and tidy.
Elaine, this piece of writing is quite well written down to the punctuation! I love how your writing consist of some photos to back up your writing. I also like the fact that you had such descriptive words for the environment in tōtara park. Something I think you should work on is subtitles and paragraphs that have 5-6 sentences.