Describe a creature/animal in detail. Give information to my peers about the creature

Has your teacher ever asked you to create your every own new species of an animal and you actually enjoyed it… WOW!  You haven’t had that very specific thing happen to you, well it happened to me today and boy did I think hard, like very, very, very, very, VERY, hard. But anyways this is what I made.

“Is that a dog with a blue stone in its chest?” said a random person commenting on my Sog. Yes that was a very random person commenting on my Sog was right. you dear reader are probably wondering how I made a Sog and if I was going to sell MY Sog. The thing is, I didn’t make a Sog and the other thing is I’m not selling my Sog.

“Where did I find a Sog you might and probably will be asking, well I found him in his natural habitat which is in the middle of nowhere. I’m joking, I found him in the middle of the ocean while I was swimming. He was just a lonely little pup trying to keep afloat. His family or pack was nowhere to be found so I scooped him up and took him home.  

Now, when I brought him home I had no idea what his diet was but then I realised he was kind of a dog so I zipped to the store and quickly picked up a HUGE bag of dog food and went back home and boy was he hungry. He ate the whole bag of dog food but after he was well fed something smacked me across the face! “OWWWW!!!!” My dog just smacked me across the face with his tail!! I was mortified because it wasn’t just a normal dog tail, it looked like nothing I had ever seen before and to this day I have no idea what kind of tail that is but it sure does help with swimming so I’m happy.

The next day other things started happening, don’t worry it was little things like… “MY HOUSE IS IN WATER!!!” Ok maybe it wasn’t little but I guess that’s what happens when you own a Sog but obviously I had no idea that he was a Sog when that happened so I can’t blame him even though I can! That’s not the only thing that happened that day. He created a tsunami in my house, made it rain, snow, hail, thunder and lightning inside, made my backyard into a pool and of course put my house into the ocean but he was still learning how to control his abilities so I still don’t blame him.

The day after that was REALLY hot and my Sog was just really weak and tired so I started wondering if his weakness was heat and turns out, past Elaine might be smarter than present Elaine because I was right. Not only the heat that he is weak towards but it also deepens on the heat level, like, say if it was really cold, cold or just normal temperature, he would be perfect maybe even better but if it was hot or really hot then he would be weak and so, very tired.

Now that I have trained him we have started going out for walks, swims and all other activities. I will tell you he is one great runner and AMAZING swimmer. Honestly I think he would be the world’s best champion in all of the world wide sports activities because he is very energetic and fast at nearly everything but yes there are downsides like that heat weakness thing and sometimes when he sees something he wants he will sprint after it like its going away in a second.

Let’s just say in conclusion I’m quite worried about what will happen in the future because there is still a lot I probably don’t know about him, like, what if he can teleport into the future or even, maybe, disappear into the past. Who knows, but what I know is, we are going to get into a lot of trouble. (I’m joking, mum, please don’t growl me) 

This is what he looks like 🙂

3 thoughts on “Describe a creature/animal in detail. Give information to my peers about the creature

  1. Pearl thinks it is a creative way of writing. We (Mrs D and the other children) like how you have different perspectives. We (Mr W and Waka) like the picture that shows what it looks like. We also like the ending part. Also, we like the sense of humour you put in.

    To make it even stronger, you can explain what animals did you use to hybrid into this creature. Please also be careful about your spelling and punctuation. You can improve by editing.

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