As there is a new week
i begin to feel weak
as I play my games
I realise that they are lame
so i started to think of what to do
Instead I played a game that had a brawler called Lou
So as I just sat there and began to watch tv
As I laughing out loud
I like to sit out side and look at a cloud
As I was looking some one was playing a really loud
As the days come to the end I realise what everything I did
All the memory I made the way it was all up to me looking at
A brawler skin from brawl stars that looked like a squid
Great job Ethan! This is a very well written poem and I loved your vocabulary. Despite the wonderful poem, I feel that you could use your capital letter correctly and maybe some commas. Fantastic work!
Good job Ethan. I like the way your poem rhymes and great use of vocabulary. Make sure to check over your work before you publish it.