School holiday poem

As  there is a new week

i begin to feel weak

as I play my games

I realise that they are lame

so i started to think of what to do

Instead I played a game that had a brawler called Lou

So as I just sat there and began to watch tv

As I laughing out loud

I like to sit out side and look at a cloud

As I was looking some one was playing a really loud

As  the days come to the end I realise what everything I did

All the memory I made the way it was all up to  me looking at

A brawler skin from brawl stars that looked like a squid

 

 

2 thoughts on “School holiday poem”

  1. Great job Ethan! This is a very well written poem and I loved your vocabulary. Despite the wonderful poem, I feel that you could use your capital letter correctly and maybe some commas. Fantastic work!

  2. Good job Ethan. I like the way your poem rhymes and great use of vocabulary. Make sure to check over your work before you publish it.

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