Guardians of the Earth
We should pick up rubbish and stop littering also start throwing trash in the bin. The people that care will have to pay the price and the people that don’t will not. But still in people’s vision they will be hated so help the earth.
7 replies on “Guardians of the Earth”
Gurfateh you need to add more punctuation more complex vocabulary and more words to this. I liked the idea of the blog but if you added more it would’ve been nice.
good but a little too small and add more detail still good but just need to make it bigger.
Nice writing! But if I had to say 1 thing you could work on it would be to add some more.
Thanks:Jeevan for the advice and feedback yes I could add more detail and writing.
Thanks Jeevan for the advice and feedback and yes I could add more detail and writing.
Great story but if you can change the background next time I couldn’t really see the story
Thanks Bryan for feedback appreciate it yes I would consider your opinion.