What are sports?
Sport’ is a physical activity which, through casual or organised participation, aims at expressing or improving physical fitness and mental wellbeing, forming social relationships or obtaining results in competition at all levels.
How many teams have I made it in for sports?
By far I have made it into every single team for school sports. My recent sports were touch basketball, volley & softball. I have done all of the sports at school and I am in the team for badminton and I enjoy all of them. I
My favourite sports and why?
My favourite sport in school is basketball because I think that I have learned a lot from basketball but my favourite sport outside of school is field hockey. I love field hockey. I play Striker or right wing.
What is field hockey?
Field hockey is a team sport structured in standard hockey format, in which each team plays with eleven players in total, made up of ten outfield players and a goalkeeper. Teams have to move a hockey ball around a pitch by hitting it with a hockey stick towards the team’s shooting circle and then into the goal.
5 replies on “Sports day & sports teams”
Nice piece of writing Gurleen! Your introduction was a really good piece and shows you know a lot about sports. I also enjoyed how you did questions before each paragraph which gave me a quick view on what was coming next. A goal you can work on next could be adding a bit more detail on how each sport is or how the process was to get into each team. Good job!
This is so interesting to read! I loved the way you described your story and used a lot of detail. I think you should work on using different punctuation so that it makes the story a a little bit more easier to read like ; : () – … etc. Other than that, amazing work Gurleen! 💕
I liked knowing what your favourite sports are and why. You have shown an incredible amount of detain especially from the start. Next time you should try opening with a introduction or opening statement and not just head straight to a sub heading aka, ‘what are sports.’ either than that i was very impressed the the detail and what you included.
Well done Gurleen!
I liked knowing what your favourite sports are and why. You have shown an incredible amount of detain especially from the start. Next time you should try opening with a introduction or opening statement and not just head straight to a sub heading aka, ‘what are sports.’ either than that i was very impressed the the detail and what you included.
Well done!
Hi Gurleen!
This piece of writing is amazing it informs me about what sports there is to play and what you’ve enjoyed playing here at The Gardens School. The choice of writing you chose is really simple and easy to understand. Personally I think what you need to work on is adding some more information and details,