1.Main highlights of the holiday
Spotlight in the dark.
Movies, Junk food, Truth or dare.
Little mermaid, Food.
2.During rainy days we did
Board Games,Free time,Games
Maths test,Spelling bee,Learning
,Art,Origami
- Birthdays
Baking , Yes day , Cakes
Hanged out with the neighbours, Games
Shopping , Gutter board.
3 replies on “Writing Competition Piece – School Holiday Haiku”
Hi Heaven-leigh,
This haiku is really amazing! It’s very simple and has all the components a haiku should have. Next time, you could consider rhyming words to really conjoin the haiku together. But overall, good job!
Hi Heaven-Leigh, this Haiku is very nice. I liked how you picked something different from the other people and how you described the “Main highlights of the holiday “, “During rainy days we did” and “birthdays”. Next time you could improve rhyming the word more! But it was very nice!
It’s a good poem, but the last time I recalled a haiku was a Japanese poem of seventeenthe seventeen, other than that it was okay