Tawas on the track leading the pack, no looking back.
Kowhais on the field starting to yield, trying to use their smiles
as a shield.
Kauris being loud they ain’t leading the crowd, is that making them proud?
Rimu might have won, but next year hasn’t begun.
Athletics just makes my genetics to cool and fun.
We all be cheering, and some little kids I be hearing,
Several hours we have a good time, several hours I’m just thinking of a rhyme.
Who will win? who will lose? who will go and find a golden goose?
When the day is over, we all don’t wanna play, after these races because we pray, pray, pray.
2 replies on “Athletics Poem.”
Such a nice poem! You did a great job but you should remember to add capital letters! ❤️
What an amazing poem you have I like how you had added heaps of rhyme it was one of the best poems I’ve every read, But maybe you could try and work on Capital letters.