-Ishita Luthra-
The crinkle of trees,
Are the same each year.
Tick Tick the minutes go by I feel so free,
I can see everything, even a lovely kind dear .
I can hear each voice of the water,
going plop plop
The fire is so bright it’s like Quasar.
I don’t want to sound like a brager,
But finding this place is better than anything else.
My days are filled with joy and harmony
I don’t need no money.
The mist hovers and covers the whole city
Even each flower is as pretty.
Hi ishita, this poem is really good! I love the figurative speech! Good job, I think it doesn’t really rhyme but it is ok because it sounds like a little story!! Maybe work on your rhyming. Once again, good job!
really great, inspirational.
I really like your poem it very mysterious and I love it!
Good story you need to fix some spelling mistakes but it felt like I was in there