The Unknown City

-Ishita Luthra-

The crinkle of trees,

Are the same each year.

Tick Tick the minutes go by I feel so free,

 I can see everything, even a lovely kind dear .

I can hear each voice of the water,

 going plop plop

  The fire is so bright it’s like Quasar.

 I don’t want to sound like a brager, 

 But finding this place is better than anything else.

My days are filled with joy and harmony 

I don’t need no money.

The mist hovers and covers the whole city

Even each flower is as pretty.

 

 

4 Responses

  1. jaslync_0203 at |

    Hi ishita, this poem is really good! I love the figurative speech! Good job, I think it doesn’t really rhyme but it is ok because it sounds like a little story!! Maybe work on your rhyming. Once again, good job!

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  2. Aditya at |

    really great, inspirational.

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  3. harleenka_2710 at |

    I really like your poem it very mysterious and I love it!

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  4. aveerc_0810 at |

    Good story you need to fix some spelling mistakes but it felt like I was in there

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