On cross all children got into their houses colour and waited their turn . First year 3 went then 4 5 .
Soon after it was the year six girls turned that was me. I was in the rimu house and we ran around the gardens.
The teacher clapped the two boards together and we ran. I was somewhere in the middle and I went with my friend and she was get very tired and had a lot of pain I helped her push through then we were coming close to the middle in the middle my so mind started hurting and my foot got a cramp then
Samayra help me we were get to the end when Samayra was gonna give up I said no we got this Samayra we ran through the race and
we’re where at the end but there was huge mud puddle I almost lost my shoe so did Samayra we got to the end and I am 16 Samayra came 17 we both said that was so fun But hard we were also muddy and gross but we did have fun then we to assembly there were calling out the winners first. First the kiwis my brother came first then
it was time to a puc the houses Kofi came first after 8 years rimu had won the 8 years but it is ok. Thanks for listening
Overall, great writing, Janvi.
Please because of your punctuations, e.g. full stops, and capital letters.