Today I will be talking about pollution
We need to come up with a big solution
To get rid of the pollution
We need to clean the big blue ocean
So let’s go give it a try
Clean the ocean to take away the plastic that floats
Maybe try it and hire some boats
We need to keep our oceans clean
So then the aquatic animals can roam free
We need to keep our oceans nice and clean
So the fish and aquatic animals can swim and be seen
Let’s gather our friends and work as a team
Together we can make the ocean gleam
I really like the rhyming in the peom and I like the way you said to hire some boats let’s try and use some punctuation next time.
I really like the rhyming in the peom and I like the way you said to hire some boats let’s try and use some punctuation next time.
Hi Japji, good work on your rhyming and I can see the purpose from this, though I would suggest what Gurleen said about punctuation. Good Job!
Thank you Darlene for commenting on this blog I really appreciate it. Yes I agree I think I should work more on my punctuation and that’s good that I have some room for more improvement. Thank you. Have a good day 🙂