Parade
Victory, emotional
Smiling, crying, singing
Proud, country, sad, killed
Killing, crying, bombing
Depression, sad
War
Parade
Victory, emotional
Smiling, crying, singing
Proud, country, sad, killed
Killing, crying, bombing
Depression, sad
War
The work was…
Great job fantastic work it was pretty memorising and also created beautifully.
I think you should work on…
Adding a bit more words cause I don’t 100% know what your talking about its great but its just short like he did this that but it is fantastic work although of the little problem
I have a question…
Why did you do it in short sentences?
Fantastic
-Zyx Sharma-