Swimming programme is great for you
When I got up, ate my breakfast and looked at the date it was the day to go swimming, I was very excited because I haven’t gone swimming in years and I was prepared. The night before I went to sleep I put on my togs,goggles,towel and swimming cap. My mom told me that swimming has benefits which are very good for you so I went to the swimming program which was good.
Swimming can be the best thing you need to know. It actually helps you a lot and swimming helps kids all around the world so there will be less kids drowning in the ocean in a flood or in a tsunami. The people that last year died was a lot so to decrease that we have to learn how to swim so we can help others. Now let’s try to make no one die and to do that we need to swim a lot.
Swimming is good for you and it is very fun to learn and you can do very cool moves like a back strove and it’s kind of relaxing. When you swim you can be a hero e.g saving someone while they are drowning in a flood or tsunami. So you can be a hero and have fun at the same time so be a hero. When you need to help someone just be the one who everyone likes and help them and they will be thankful.
Swimming keeps your heart and lungs healthy, increases stamina and even improves balance and posture. Which can save your life in a tsunami or in a flood which you can live if that happens. When you swim it can make you faster and faster which can win races and make your parents proud or by swimming.
Try to encourage your friends if your school has somewhere to swim so they can teach their friends. So it will make a very big difference in the world. You can do team effort and help each other. You can swim and help your friends if they are struggling. If you have a friend that knows how to swim, you can do a 2 person swim. It’s ok if you need help one day you will be helping another person.
You have written this well Jeevanjot – I am so impressed with your excellent use of punctuation. You have written a very convincing, persuasive piece of writing which clearly explains all the benefits of learning to swim – well done!
Thank you