The monster and the 2 men
One day the building started to rumble, the 2 men thought it was the end of the world until they heard a monster screaming at the top of his lungs, and did a big grumble.
The two men felt like they could have just heard a sound, or cartoon named Ben ten.
Then they were hit with a cold breeze and started to freeze.
The monster took a step, which felt like King Kong jumping.
Then the building was in deep asleep again.
The two men started to scream, as they thought they were going to dream, thinking they were going to die of screaming.
Until they saw the monster getting confused a grenade flew to the monster then, BOOM!
WACK! SMACK! A sword flew across the debris, and hit the monster RRROOOAAARR! Cried the monster.
The monster swung his whip and set everything into a blaze that looked like a maze.
The 2 men stared and feared for their life thinking “why did I come here in the first place”.
The 2 men striked. and disliked the monster, then cut it into a trillion pieces
The monster was now on the floor and turned into magma and plasma.
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