Do you know how to swim? I do and I’m going to tell you how I learnt how to swim. It was very hot waiting for the bus but when we hopped in the bus it was so much hotter I started to sweat. Everyone was loud and people started to fall asleep. I was shocked how they could sleep through this. When we got there we learnt they closed the whole place just for us. When we got changed it suddenly got cold. When we got into the pool it was warm. They told us to start blowing bubbles so we did after that they got us to race.
It was pretty hard but we finished. They then got us into groups. I was in group 2 and we started to swim. They let us do freestyle at first but then they stopped us and told us to line up. It was to teach us how to swim and breathe. I Took in a lot of water it was very hard to breath after that.
Thank you for sharing, Joey! I enjoyed reading your story, and I like how you try to put accurate words there. I hope you will write more than two paragraphs next time.