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School holidays yay!
So much fun today hey hey!
School holidays yay!
2
Rainbows end today
Rolercoaster,Invader
Stratosphere,Logflume
3
Everyone’s happy
School holidays end today
Everyone’s sleeping
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1
School holidays yay!
So much fun today hey hey!
School holidays yay!
2
Rainbows end today
Rolercoaster,Invader
Stratosphere,Logflume
3
Everyone’s happy
School holidays end today
Everyone’s sleeping
6 replies on “Writing Comp Peice”
Goofy ahh
I like how you made everything have a connection to one topic, and I like how you did 3 different ones.
Work better on your spelling please, my brain had a stroke while trying to comprehend what paragraph 2 is.
Nice work 👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥
Oh my this did not rhyme this made me sad on my BBD but it has potential. It was nice ish but not the best.
You used 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables in your 3 haikus, that’s great. You also used long words ( good vocabulary). Next time you should make a haiku that sounds like a peom, because for me, when I read your haikus, it sounded like a song.
– Vishaka