June
25
Matariki celebration
Dear Kylie,
Matariki is the Māori new year and is a valued celebration. Many people say that each star has its own personality and quality’s. Matariki has a rich history passed down from generation to generation and will continue to be and with the awesome myths and legends unique to each tribe or iwi many enjoy the stories!
So to celebrate such unique event I would like to propose an idea, what if the Gardens community could host a celebration where everyone is welcome and enjoy traditional food and music. We could preform a Haka and some Waiata! We can also explain the history and watch the rising of the stars!
So what do you say Kylie? Would you help to do this wonderful event?
Sincerely the Gardens community.
Hi Kaitlyn, I think this is an acceptable letter to the person you were writing to, I liked how you described about Matariki, then explained the reasons to why you would propose this. That’s all I can say so keep up the good work!
Fabulous work, Kaitlyn! I love reading your writing, it is always so intriguing.
Kaitlyn your writing is really good!! I really like the way you described Matariki, you did really well!
Wow that was an amazing story I like how you added different special words!
GOODS
wow I really like how you actually choose people to write your story to your writing is really nice but most of all you punctuation is… Fantastic!
Work on
I think you might want to make it a bit more long with a bit more rich vocabulary and try to make the reader engage a bit more .
Question
Why did you want to choose that person?