By: Lorval Faifai
Mommy Mushroom was reading a story,
Her kids were impatiently hearing.
Their names were Nora and Norrie
Nora and norrie was really impatient for mommy mashroom to get to the good part
So the baby was crying for hour and hours
Once mommy mashroom got to the good part nora and norrie was happily into the story
Then it was 10:10 and it was time to go to sleep in a leap
In the morning the baby mushroom were soooo hungry they could eat a horse!!
But there to small for that there small like a bakeben.
THE END
2 replies on “My poem”
good poem but recheck your poems for no mistakes you haid hour not hours no rhyme but I loved reading it 👍
Very nice poem you have here lorval, But I think you could add a bit more rhyming to this poem but overall you did you great job?
-Paige Hakalo