Written by Matthew Kent
The glowing yellow tree monster was doing woodland yoga,
Then saw a baby yoda.
Baby yoda used the force,
Then made a storm as powerful as a horse.
The storm was waving and weaving through the forest,
Flying through the trees as fast as a cyclist.
The forest monster fell from the wind pushing him over,
Then the forest was falling like there was a bulldozer.
There was a mystical glow from the monster.
The monster was fixing the damage with baby yoda as a helper.
The trees fixed and were all dancing about,
Then the sun came out.
Cool poem Matthew, it is funny and your rhyming was good. I also liked the metaphor about the horse. Great Work!
I also liked that part of the poem and I will keep up the rhyming.
The rhyming is awesome and very creative! But you can inprove on onomatopoeia.
Thank you for the advice and complement I will use onomatopoeia
I like you poem it has a good wimsical feel to it and the I feel that the writing realy reflect’s you
very nice poem, the yellow tree monster kind of reminds me of a movie called mune.