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The knight was an ant compared to the giant
but the knight wasn’t scared, she was like a brave lion.
As their cries out for help screaming and shoving past each other,
The knight stood her ground like no other.
The giant roared louder than anything “ROAR” he shouted
as the knight just pouted.
She could the fireballs falling
looking like they were squalling.
So she drew her sword to his volcano heart,
The puny little knight had to be smart.
The giant screamed, and roared and ranted
As the village began to chant.
As they chanted, the wind grew louder
The knight threw her sword, but the monster allowed her.
They defeated the monster at the end of the day
The village yelped; “hip, hip hooray!”
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4 replies on “The Knight”
I love this writing of yours! Punctuation and stuff are great, although I think you could use more vocabulary I hope you can take my advice and achieve it.
GOODS.
Wow fantastic work you did amazing I love the super punctuation and also the ROUR! Was spectacular!
ADVICE.
I loved your writing but I think you should make it a bit more longer and go a bit from the start also add a little more words in your sentence.
QUESTION.
Why did you choose this as your topic?
I loved your writing Pareejat it was great to read ! Although I do think a few sentences could be longer .
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