Writing Comp NZ

First Draft: Timmy’s  Goosh Town:

Chapter one Goose fun:

MUM MUM ! Can I go to Goosh Town what do you mean and what is Goose town Quinn Goosh Town MUM anyway it’s only the best theme park ever. Quinn that’s  what you said last time about Jenny’s Colourful Carnival Of Mayhem and that was a catastrophe the ferris wheel fell off the stand when we came in. but mum the tickets are five dollars. I’d do it If it were free, hint hint Quinn. yea i meant i’ll pay mum .alright let’s go then yay. can Tomas karl and Ethan Porter come. Your Paying .Right . (static) boys get over here.  over(static) 5 minutes later. Hands up if you want to come to goosh town with me Tomas Ethan what about you  quinnl_0812@thegardens.school.nz I thought I said with me did I not oh right. Ok let me pay for tickets26 hours later alright here are your tickets. Alright get in the car kids I’m so excited me two Quinn me three how long is it gon na take to get there 1 hour oh well lets play a game eye spy? Na how bout hmm OOO!! I know. What about the number plate game??? What You know the one were you spell your full name from letters on number plates Quinn you’d win that easy when the last time you’ve seen a Q on a number plate if any thing im most likely to lose fair point so do you want to play shure hey guys i just found  a Q. Theres know way look at the car in front Know way what did you see that before ha ha nope. Thats like so rare how was that the first thing you found n nice quinnl_0812@thegardens.school.nz Amazing Ethathan  budm pish HA HA good one. I found my T cool cool Tom my Eye ahhaha good one again i found a number plate with my full name Tom thats insane jarvis !!! well Tom wins. Ahh what was my reward, the best pie what do you mean you get more money to buy a pie and I’m shouting the money so i should get more right?mother can we go to the pie shop yes darling. Alright here you go 10  20 20 hehehehehe just kidding here ethan nother 10 for good sport. alright let’s go get a pie. um canIi get a mince and cheese please and one milk choc chip cookie. Hard or soft. soft please butter chicken with no chicken  please shore thanks. And that’s how you get a free pie here’s your money by the way. 

Mince and cheese.with cookie dough here you go. 5 minute later were so close pshhh 

Uh oh what was that. crap flat tyer you kids walk heres the directions on my phone ill get this sorted out theres a mechanic over there. run guys lets get there now goosh town awaits. Look just around the corner oh my goosh alright got your tickets. Quinn where’s yours. in my hat see few give dem da tickets (speaker) welcome to goosh town there are lots of stalls and  rides for you to enjoy. Lets take a look at some of the rides. Log thrum goosh fall goosh swing and the thing were looking at the barn last. why the barn emphasis on the. Secrets ok Quinn lets go on the log thrum. Ok we’re on next alright Quinn hop in the front why me im paying why should i get splashed fair point how bout you Ethan X.MA right. Tom? Fine going up the track look the got goose in the pond why can i here honking. honk honk honk probably a goose your right i heard that the goose pulls people out of the log. Crap look here he comes goose attack !!! oh he just sat on me unlucky goose Quinn is funny tom Well i get to pet a goose ha ha ha so you’re the unlucky goose hahahahaha!!! Hey tom what look another goose and the drop yay i wonder if my goose is gona let me leave well we have a park friend  now why the goose did not hop off or show any signs off wanting to let’s go to the goose fall next. Were at the top and we still have the goose ok strap him in? Yes Tomas strap him in he’s safe nowwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooo!!! Hooooook (they say in sink). Well that was certainly an experience yep can I go to the bathroom yep be quick more adventures await ooooook. Uhh why is everyone in the bathroom well long story short there’s a riot oh no oh no oh no well the po po police said it well be done in a few minutes and there is no damage from what i’ve seen  who started the riot some guy stole a hotdog of someone and ate it right in front of them super obnoxiously and got a

punch in the face and now there using sings as swords. now the 

There both going to prison. yay it’s over now can we go to the lazy river, why doesnt sound to exiting but there’s bumper boats and speed boat races. why on earth is it called the lazy river. I have know idea and beast of all there’s the goose boat its like a bike but for water and its fast. What first race. k 3 2 1 go holy i did not think the throttle was that sencative sensitive sharp turn much ok I just realised that theres a small little lazer blaster to stop your engine. pew pew pew why did my engine stop. Gun my dude oh. Pew why does it sound like that pew pew dam. im being past  pew pew you got me. Nice win Ethan bumper boats. ima bum you into the water bumping at high speeeeeeeed!!!. Oo look what we have hear a little tunnel to explore look goose, grab it 1 goose is enough no I Quinn need two goose and then ill train them to use the guns on the speed boats and ill always win. You mean you and the 2 goose

Yea i I guse guess  still team goose for da win Ok gooses pep talk bump tom and ethan and hide in the tunnel remember if you see them bump them ok goose team out. honk honk honk a honk alright in position i got eyes on them bumping (static) ill get them over to the tunnel were you will be waiting over(static) alright i hope there here honk!!!!!!!! (the geese honk in sink) yay back up. Ok we win well i see mum in the drive so lets head back. (a massive explosion in the distance)(Quinn turns wide eyed) well thats awkward. 

The End