Swimming programme
Hello I’m Raam and today I’m gonna show what our school swimming programme is and why you should do it. People say it’s just you know not *drowning*. But there’s a whole new story, I mean old. Basically, I presume.
You can also save people and yourself well isn’t that obvious that’s just a bonus to swimming. Just imagine the endless possibilities of swimming like the CommonWealth games or the Olympics and you know the ordinary fitness stuff.
Swimming is fun, enjoyable and relaxing (I guess) like swimming with your friend or learning something new like swimming tricks in swimming. So isn’t that! Convincing (I guess (again). And you can maybe save someone so that’s even better and the instructors are quite friendly as well.
Health is a big part of swimming even though I did say that it’s like ordinary stuff. It Is A Big Part Of Swimming. It’s good because it requires you to move all the muscles in your body and helps people with asthma.
That’s why you should do swimming, so next time try it so you can do that stuff like cool as swimming tricks.
I like how you organised the paragraphs and tried to use advanced punctuations. The start may need a change, as you do NOT need to write “my name is …, and you are going to show…”.