STAR SHORTBREAD COOKIES
Have you ever had a craving of something sweet? Which is an exceptionally delicious, tasting treat to fill your appetite. This is star shortbread cookies that is also a amazing treat for a amazing quick and easy snack.
Ingredients:
- 150g salted butter, softened
- ½ cup icing sugar, 75g
- ½ cup cornflour, 75g
- ½ tsp cinnamon
- 1 cup plain flour, 150g
- White chocolate, melted
- Sprinkles to decorate
Methods:
Step 1: preheat the oven to 160°C
Step 2: Cut the butter into cubes and add it to the bowl of the mixer. After that add the icing sugar to the bowl and beat the ingredients for a few minutes until it is pale and fluffy.
Step 3 : As soon as you have done that, sift the corn flour,cinnamon and flour into the mixer, mix on low until it is finely crumbed. Take the dough out of the mixer and start needing the dough on the bench for a few minutes.
Step 4 : Roll the dough out to a 1cm thickness. Use a star shaped cookie cutter to cut into shapes. Carefully transfer to a lined baking tray and bake for 15 minutes until starting to brown on the edges but still soft
Step 5 : Once the shortbread has cooled, dip each one in the melted chocolate and spoon on the sprinkles
Step 6: Once the chocolate has firmed up, serve or store in an airtight container for later
Very nice Reha
This is a really good example of a quick and simple recipe. I would surely try this recipe at home but, next time add linking words to your recipe.
Hi Reha!
In the recipe the detail and description you put in your writing was very complex. It had enough vocabulary and had a lot of specific ingredients. What I think you should work on is your language features ( metaphor, simile, personification) it can improve your writing and the skills that you put.
Hi Reha, this recipe is very straightforward and has detail. I can easily make this at home and clearly understand what’s happening. Something you included is one of the language features, like time related words for example, after or as soon as. You haven’t stated in the title what’s going on, what I mean as in it says ‘Star Shortbread Cookies’. As the reader I’m not sure if this is a picture or maybe a story about these cookies, next time add ‘How to make _________’ so the reader will know. Another thing you will need to add is the materials like the bowl, tray, parchment paper, etc. Overall this is a really good recipe, good effort.
Kia ora Reha,
This recipe is just so ENTHUSIASTIC! I will for sure try this recipe at home. I love eating shortbread they are my favourite. Your recipe has so much details and it makes my life easier.
But maybe you should try adding some linking words. It will make my life much more easier.
Kind Regards
Sarah.A