Kindness

Kindness 

 

Once upon a time there was an old man with a sick daughter in the hospital



 ha was very poor  he had to sell lots of stuff to try and pay up da doctor for the medicine such as his car furnitures and worked 20 hours a day only getting 10 dollars



One day he went the mall and mrought a lottery ticket he then walked home but he had lost it



Leather on in the evening a man named Ryan knocked on the door and said your lorry ticket fell .so he gave it back and the man gave him his number



Later on he scratch the ticket and there was 3 cherries he had won 1 billlion dollars he than came to Ryan house and gave him 500m and thanked him.



He went to the hospital and paid the 1 million money now his daughter was better he was a millionaire.p



It turned out ryan had a son and his daughter and Ryan son fell madley in love with with each other .

Now it was there wedding they had a 

Dj music and cake then it had started Ryan JR will you take olivia hand olivia will you take Ryan Jr hand yes they said

 

You may kiss the bride

 

After  a while that had a son and a daughter.



2 Replies to “Kindness”

  1. xaviert_0108

    This story is very good and funny but the only thing that was wrong was that you spelt some words wrong but that’s the only thing you did wrong but good job Ryan

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  2. alexanderc_2211

    maybe make a longer paragraph. Some words are spelt wrong. Very good though

    -Alex

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