Once upon a time there was a poor broke boy called Peter. He was hungerly looking through the Forest for food but instead of food he found a mansion. He then decided to open the door and try to steal some food. Then when he opened the door and went inside the door suddenly disappeared and he got scared so he went further into the house to find food and find a way out. He then found three rooms, one with a bottle, an ancient scroll and a chest so he decided to go into the room with a chest. Finally he decided to open the chest and found the bottle, so he opened the bottle and try to drink but a genie came out. The genie said thanks for freeing me. You will have 3 wishes but remember to think about your wish so the boy greedily wishes for infinite gold and the room starts pouring with gold and he suffocates in the pile of gold.
Your blog is really nice but you should make it longer and add more details
This is good Ryan