“I DON’T WANT TO GO TO AMBURY FARM”everyone shouted and lunged “why’d the bus stop WERE HERE’’ everyone stormed out the bus as if there was bird flu in the bus and out what a rush “GET IN YOUR GROUPS KNOW GROUP 1 AND 2 COME THIS WAY” hey guys what did she say what did you do this time I was naming the ducks that’s mr Qackers and miss Quakers “SAOIRSE HURRY UP”
Coming ok you guys are going to how sheep get sheared any questions yes you”does it hurt the sheep? “It feels like when you fall off a skateboard now let go inside” dibs bottom row ok “ok’’ boom boom I neve thought that sheep would fight back they really don’t like getting sheared.
Ok kids come this way you are going to make something with wool ok wash your hands I tried to use the hand sanitizer dispenser but a spider came out and crawled on my hand I screamed then flicked it on the floor then other people screamed ok if you have finished you can take a set and we can hand out wool now so I sat down and got my pieces wool “now go to a sink then put hot water on it make sure its drenched” DONE “ok I will give you dishwashing liquid and rub it till it is covered with bubbles then wash the bubbles off you made velcro you guys are going to spin wool next’’.
Take a set and take a piece of wool spread it out sideways then partner up with someone one of you spin the wool clockwise and the other person spins it anticlockwise like this “WOW’’ now you guys try ok you go that way and I will do it that was wow it worked it did not take that long “LUNCH TIME IT’S LUNCH TIME’’ everyone was outside by the time I washed my hands I sat down and ate all my food then got up.
People were already in there groups YES WE ARE GOING TO SEE ALL ANIMALS NOW “look cows sheep horses chickens geese ducks turkeys peacocks pigs bors calm down sorry the cows were first we named one ed sheeran he was one of a kind then the sheep they did not like us on bit the horse where huge but stunning it called a Clydesdale very tall it didn’t get to close but I just looked at it as if was a pictures“COME ON LET’S SEE THE CHICKENS NOW’’ ok oww there’s little chicks look look so cute ahhhh the goose is going to bite me ok time to see the pig one of them we are running out of time now come on we have to get to the bus get your bags the is going to leave ok I got on the yes now
Great ideas, Saiorse. Please remember, when you edit your writing, you need to check your spelling and punctuation.
I love your writing Saoirse! I would love to see some more punctuation next time, but great job!