Hi guys my name is Shazleen Gokal and today i’ll be telling what is the different to Bontical gardens and Tōtara park the different is that the tōtara park has the tallest trees and has no flowers and the bontical gardens it has a lot of flowers
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Different to bontical gardens and tōtara park
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I would recommend to write more paragraphs!
Really good shaz but add more sentences and photos
Good reflection, Shazleen! Although I would heavily recommend you add more information, and description into your paragraphs. Along with writing in a more detailed and explained way. Also exploring a larger base of words may really help to improve your writing and capture the reader’s interest.