Children looking at the firefly glowing moon
The darkness crept in with a soft loom
They put up a ladder and climbed up high
The stars were blinking up in the sky
The kids landed on the moon which made a THUD!
The dust flew up like a flood
They looked at their bodies it was as bright as the sun
They started to laugh and have some fun
They danced pranced and ran around
Then they heard a sound that was quite loud
they heard their mum shout Time for dinner!
And off they ran smiling like a winner.
Feather:You did a great job picking your rhyming words for this poem!
Feather:I really like the similes and metaphors you used, they definitely paint a picture in my mind!
Wings badge:For next time, you could use speech marks for when a character is talking and optionally, you can have the characters talk/interact with each other to make the story a more lively! (*’▽’*)