If you went to mars, but could only take 3 luxury items, what would you take?
Item 1
My cat Lynxy, which would lead to needing a space suit, but would that be a luxury, or not? I would say it isn’t a luxury because you need it for the cat to survive space and mars. And cat food also isn’t a luxury cause the cat needs that. Also, the C.S.S. (Cat space suit) has a camera.
Item 2
Because a C.S.S. is necessary I will bring my cat Lynxys best friend, Greedy cat. Greedy cat is a short stubby, ginger cat. Which I nicknamed Greedy cat because it used to steal Lynxys food.
Item 3
Because I’m bringing cats, I’m gonna need a cat tower for the cats to sleep on. I would bring the biggest, best quality cat tower you can buy! Which would be massive!! It would have tons of stuff to play with, places to scratch on, and also a miniature gravity generator!
What other people think of my item choices
Kabir said “the cats are a good choice, it will be good entertainment and fun to watch them play.
Matthew said “it’s okay choices, until the guy who owns Greedy cat realises he’s gone.
Saoirse said “I like Greedy cat, I like Greedy cat, if my cats met Greedy cat, my cat would slap Greedy cat.
Lynxy
Ha, you are surely a cat-loving person, Tom! I like your logic in this post, and your ideas are well-organized. Please be more careful when you do proofreading next time, they are a few capital letters you missed out. Good job!
This made me laugh out loud and I found the comments entertaining too. (Mathew is probably right about Greedy Cat’s owner not agreeing with your choices!)
I think you could work on your possessive apostrophes. For example, if you’re talking about something belong to Lynxy it would be written as ‘ Lynxy’s ‘ .
Very funny Tom – keep it up!