School Holiday at the Sand Dunes
sSchool holidays, it’s really fun because at the time period, you get two weeks to have a the best time of your life! at the school holidays. You’re naturally in the car to go somewhere or someplace, and I’m going to the sandy hot sand dunes (I’m not doing that right now but I have gone to the hot sandy sand dunes).
At it the sand dunes you can get have lots of fun! It’s sandy, hot and you hear the water slash and other people having a good time. You hear the birds flying and people shouting. You can smell the salt water and hot chips. You can feel the sand on your hands. It feels like grainy and dry. The sand dunes are really tall, sandy, big, and hot.
I get a wooden stick when I climb to make it easier to climb. It’s not amazing all the time, because the wooden stick could break into two so if you use one don’t put too much pressure on it. But as you climb up the hot sand dunes, you can’t drop it, and if you fall down it is not too steep, so you’re most likely to be ok. If you get to the top and are not scared of heights you can look at the amazing view of the beautiful horizon that lays on the sky.
And the funnest bit… running down like you feel like the flash. When you go too fast you can hold it the sand so it’s not as fast but at the sand dunes it’s sandy, rocky and sunny. and i If you get too hot, go in the water for the funniest time of your life. It is fun but if you don’t want to go up just run or go in the water and swim or just relax, eating food and respecting the time you have on holiday.
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Really nice writing, like how you used appropriate pronouns.
Reading this now is making me want to go there to. I enjoyed reading this and would like to say this is a great recount.