Why we went to swimming lessons
Have you ever been to swimming lessons? Well I have on Wednesday the 3rd of august our class went to swimming lessons to learn how to swim or to improve your swimming. We got to go because of the John Walker Field charity.
Old bus driver and new bus driver
This time on our way to the Manurewa leisure Center, We had a new bus driver. Last time we had a diffrent bus driver. The new bus driver was very quiet most of the time the old bus driver was also quiet. So we just gotta have fun on the bus like playing hand games, singing and other stuff, on our way back we got yelled at, not me but the others although we still had fun.
How we got our group’s decided
When we got there we had to go into the changing room and get changed into our togs. When we came out we had to sit down for a couple of minutes and we had to wait until the other group was finished. When it was our turn we had to sit down on the side and had to put our feet in the water, Then they introduced us to them then she told us how to get in the water after that we had to do some swimming to see what group we were in I got group 2 and some other people got 1 and 3 but when we were practicing our swimming I got changed to group 3 cause I’m too good hehe.
Good structure to your writing, Xavier. Next time you don’t need to put the sentence which tells you what the paragraph is about, just put your paragraph…it doesn’t need a subtitle.