Kāhu camp is for students that attend at The Gardens School in the intermediate year level.We attend camp so us intermediate’s can have fun experiments outside of home and school.You should attend this year’s camp because of our fun activities that we do.Such as ; swimming, hiking ,running, biking and much more! We also MIGHT attend doing fun sports like bull rush ,tag ,hide and seek? and others.We also get to be inside a cabin with 10-12 people.Camp is a fun way to connect with you peers and teachers while also connecting with nature.That’s why you definitely come to camp.😁
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Amazing writing piece I will now definitely come to camp. try use more descriptive vocabulary and fix punctuation mistakes.
I like the detail you put into describing what camp is about and really make it a place that would be exciting to be at 🙂
Something you could maybe work on is making you paragraphs a bit more organised, by splitting up sentences using full-stops and dividing the introduction and the reasonings.
Hi Ina,I really liked how you had talked about all the activities that were going to be able to do a camp. I also think that it would make your paragraphs even better if you had maybe spaced them out a bit but overall it’s very GOOD!
-Paige Hakalo
Hi Ina, this is definitely making me go to camp now! Especially with all the fun activities.
This is a brilliant piece of work Ina you have now persuaded me into coming to camp,I hope we will be able to do these things in camp!.One thing I think you should’ve work on is adding more detail to each one of you paragraph’s,but other than that this is a fantastic piece of work.
im so excited !!