Our earth is amazing
so keep it clean
We should make it the cleanest it has ever been
littering on our planet will be very sad
Our pore earth no one will be glad
littering to me is a bad sin
But when we keep it clean everyone will grin 😁
we love our earth that’s no lie
but we don’t want our earth to die
so keep it clean
as clean as can be
we love our earth especially me
3 replies on “Guardians of the Earth poem.”
I enjoy reading your poem really much but my only complaint is that barely any of the words rhyme
Nice poem but remember to use rhyming pairs, and you have very little spelling mistakes. Ka Pai
This is really nice, Ina! I liked how you used a lot of rhyming words that related to the story instead of just trying to make it rhyme. I recommend you add punctuations, even a simple comma or exclamation mark would enhance your poem really well. Ka Pai, Ina! 💗