“In a hole in the ground there lived a Hobbit.” Yes This famous line is from yes you guessed it, the hobbit. Directed by Sir Peter Jackson himself. Today you will be reading an information report about him. Enjoy!
Early life
In October 1983, there was a baby boy born named Peter Jackson. This boy had passion for making films. He went to Kapiti college and grew up in Pukerua bay Hamilton. He made his very first movie when he was 8!
Family
Peter Jackson has a wife, Fran Walsh. She is also really famous and clever just like her husband. They both had 2 children named Katie and Billy Jackson. Who are also famous. Wow what a famous family!
Movies
Peter Jackson has made many other movies not just the Hobbit. When Peter Jackson was a child his favourite movie was King Kong. He loved it so much that he decided to recreate it in 2005. He is very proud of the movies he has made.
Life achievements
One day the queen of England invited Peter Jackson to her palace. What they did at the palace was that they knited him as Sir Peter Jackson. Sir Peter Jackson has won many more other awards like best picture.
In conclusion Sir Peter Jackson has won a ton of awards. He is proud New Zealander. A lot of people are proud of him. I hope you enjoyed this information report bye 🙂
Well done Writing about Peter Jackson you did amazing
I really like the detail about Peter Jackson’s favourite movie and his famous family. And l also like your beginning sentences because it makes me want to read more.
Thank you Jimin I am glad that you like how detailed my writing is I really appreciate it :)-Japji
Goods
I think the best part of your writing was the starting line where you told that was a line in the start of the story it also kind of gives a head start for the audience to understand what it is about!
Working on
I think you need to work on your vocabulary and punctuation skills and add a bit more specific words to your sentences.
Questions
Why did you not name your conclusion and also where did you get the great starter!
– Zyx Sharma –
Thank you Zyx. For your question it was hard to think of a good starter and it was a big mistake to not name my conclusion. Thank you for your feedback.