At the Puhinui stream we were on a quest
with bottles and vials we’ll do our best
Standing on the bay we giggle and cheer
scooping up water and our mission is clear
take our vials we scoop and fill
each drop a treasure a citizen scientist’s thrill
Tiny tadpoles swirl some wiggle some glide
we look at them swim with my besties by my side
leaves rustle softly as we walk back
we where a bit behind which was a bit of lack
we hear the water of the stream trickle
As leaves brush against my skin which make me tickle.
That don’t look like a hundred words but good job!
Wow lovely use of personification. Good detail it helps me paint a perfect picture about the scenario
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