On a dark and stormy night some camper were telling spooky tales about the night sky. I was getting closer but my body felt cold and my neck hair was up high. I was terrified but when I got there they were all gone. But I still heard something but now I could hear it coming from the sky I was about to look up than blood was falling down from the sky. I was terrified and breathed heavily but… When I looked up I saw the moon having a giant sinister grin it looked at me with blood pouring out its mouth and eyes! I thought it was all a dream but it was not I thought of I stabbed my own self I will wake up but than I thought why don’t I jump in fire the than no body know what happened next… But that is just a legend no one knows if it is real or fake some people just think he went crazy.
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Great story but work a bit on your punctuation.
Thank you I will work on that.
I like the story theme setting and the ideas but I think that it needs a bit more punctuation and should be a bit longer.
Than you very much I will work on that.
Joshua it is a very very good👍👍👍👍👍
Thank you so much