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Kaitiakitanga!!!

As a kaitiakitanga we should try our best to keep our streams and our local communities clean. Throughout the past few weeks we have been collecting data from the puhinui stream for our streams. From the data we collected we found that our stream is very clean and we have to try and keep it that way. We went back to tōtara park and collected more information on the puhinui stream. The stream is looking very high quality and that we are doing a very great job keeping it clean. I convince you that we should try our best to keep clean

3 replies on “Persuasive writing”

Hi Tyreese I really liked the way you explained the meaning of kaitiakitanga, overall the spelling and punctuation were also really nice keep it up 👍.

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