Wednesday 16 October
my holiday poem
Thee whole time I had sleepovers with my cousin back and forth
We went to the arcade and golfing and to the papakura centre
Then my little cousin came to have a sleepover he is 9 at my cousins house.
We were pillow fighting because we were bored and I made my little cousin cry.
Then we gave my little cousin kombucha and we tricked him into thinking it beer.
I He started crying because he thought he was gonna get in trouble by his parents.
Then we ended our sleepover with HAVING ANOTHER SLEEPOVER.
His parents ended our sleepover streak
Thee whole time I had sleepovers with my cousin back and forth
We went to the arcade and golfing and to the papakura centre
Then my little cousin came to have a sleepover he is 9 at my cousins house.
We were pillow fighting because we were bored and I made my little cousin cry.
Then we gave my little cousin kombucha and we tricked him into thinking it beer.
I He started crying because he thought he was gonna get in trouble by his parents.
Then we ended our sleepover with HAVING ANOTHER SLEEPOVER.
His parents ended our sleepover streak
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Sounds like had a lot of but try working on your have rhyming pairs.
Sounds like a party!
Yeah it was alot
Thank you very much for the feed back samarveer